#8698 closed enhancement (fixed)
German translation of the document "A Tour of Sage"
Reported by:  mvngu  Owned by:  mvngu 

Priority:  major  Milestone:  sage6.3 
Component:  documentation  Keywords:  german 
Cc:  bblochl@…, simon.king@…, leif, minz  Merged in:  
Authors:  Bernhard Bloechl  Reviewers:  Minh Van Nguyen, André Apitzsch, Frédéric Chapoton, Simon King, Leif Leonhardy 
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As the subject says. Because the patch on this ticket is short, I think this ticket takes much less work to review than #8660. So it's very likely that the current ticket would be merged first, then #8660. Someone who knows German needs to look over the attached patch.
See this sagesupport thread for background information.
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I made some proof reading, based on the html version that Minh posted at http://sage.math.washington.edu/home/mvngu/8698tourde/
Das ist ein Rundgang durch Sage, der sich eng an der „Tour of Mathematica“ am Beginn des MathematicaBuchs folgt.
> Das ist ein Rundgang durch Sage, der sich eng an die „Tour of Mathematica“ am Beginn des MathematicaBuchs anlehnt. oder freier > Das ist ein Rundgang durch Sage, der sich an der „Tour of Mathematica“ am Beginn des MathematicaBuchs orientiert. bzw. > Das ist ein Rundgang durch Sage, der von der „Tour of Mathematica“ am Beginn des MathematicaBuchs inspiriert ist.
Wenn Sie das Sage in der NotebookVersion (als Notizbuch) benutzen
. Since Sage is a name, it should be Wenn Sie Sage in der NotebookVersion...
Die Berechnung und Ausgabe des Wertes erfolgt nach der Eingabe der Tasten shift+return
. Keys are not being entered. So, better Die Berechnung und Ausgabe des Wertes erfolgt nach gleichzeitigem Drücken der Tasten shift+return
Die Invertierung der Matrix 2 \times 2 in Sage:
should be replaced byDie Invertierung einer (2 \times 2)Matrix in Sage:
.
Damit ermittelt Sage eine quadratische Gleichung.
It was not immediately clear to me what "Damit" refers to. Moreover, the equation is not "determined" but "solved". So, perhaps better Im nächsten Beispiel löst Sage eine quadratische Gleichung.
Sage benötigt weniger als 5 Sekunden um die Anzahl der möglichen Varianten zur Partitionierung von... zu berechnen
: There is a comma missing; I don't think that one would talk about "number of possible variants of partitions"; Sage is not only computing the number of partitions, but actually finds the partitions (which is stronger); and I think "partition" is "Partition" in German. So, I suggest Sage benötigt weniger als 5 Sekunden, um alle Partitionen von... zu ermitteln.
 Last phrase of section "SageAlgorithmen benutzen": I suggest to remove the parentheses. Perhaps one can make a footnote, but I think the phrase is just fine in normal text.
Best regards, and thank you for working on a German translation,
Simon
comment:5 followup: ↓ 6 Changed 10 years ago by
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Thanks, Simon... ;)
I think what's at all meant by "Notebook" has to be explained, too. A typical German reader would first think of his laptop, not a user interface (which is funny if not annoying in the translation of the user guide when talking about ssh_keygen
...).
It would be nice if you could supply a patch on top of Minh's.
Leif
Changed 10 years ago by
Adding a section on the notebook; adding the missing plots; some proof reading
comment:6 in reply to: ↑ 5 ; followup: ↓ 8 Changed 10 years ago by
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Replying to leif:
I think what's at all meant by "Notebook" has to be explained, too.
Good idea (and perhaps it would make sense to have this in English, too).
It would be nice if you could supply a patch on top of Minh's.
Done.
My patch adds a section on the notebook (I hope I didn't write too much nonsense, because I hardly ever use the notebook) and the two pngplots that were missing.
Minh: Is it OK to first finish this ticket off before focusing on #8660? Or should the two tickets be united at an earlier stage?
Best regards, Simon
comment:7 Changed 10 years ago by
Helas.
I just found one typo. I wrote: "Die Anzahl der Möglichkeiten ist gigantisch, wir geben hier nur die letzten 40 Ziffern an."
Should be "Die Anzahl der Möglichkeiten ist gigantisch, wir geben hier nur die ersten 40 Ziffern an."
But I think this should be fixed once there are more comments of another reviewer.
comment:8 in reply to: ↑ 6 Changed 10 years ago by
Replying to SimonKing:
Minh: Is it OK to first finish this ticket off before focusing on #8660? Or should the two tickets be united at an earlier stage?
The Sage tour is much shorter than the installation guide. So I think the tour would be the first to get into the Sage standard documentation. Thank you for reviewing the tour.
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in conf.py:
 add
language = 'de'
(to replace Chapter by Kapitel)  set
html_short_title
toSage Rundgang
in index.rst:
ComputerLabors
>Computerlabors
shiftreturn
>Shift + Return
or use only the German wordsGleichheitszeichen.(Das Zeichen
>Gleichheitszeichen. (Das Zeichen
Some pictures (sin_plot.png, eigen_plot.png) are missing. I think they should be put inside doc/common and not be shipped by every language version itself.
When you fixed everything set status back to needs review.
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comment:14 Changed 6 years ago by
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comment:15 Changed 6 years ago by
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Here is a git branch, passing tests and with html building correctly. I think it can be considered as needs review.
New commits:
407cfb0  #8698: German translation of the document "A Tour of Sage"

4c2a998  Proof reading for the German version of "Tour of Sage". Adding the two missing plots. Adding as section on the Sage notebook.

723df4a  trac #8698 correct one doctest + put images in place

comment:16 Changed 6 years ago by
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See comments 7 and 9.
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Branch pushed to git repo; I updated commit sha1. New commits:
d614bbd  trac #8698 reviewer comments

comment:18 Changed 6 years ago by
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Done. Needs review now.
comment:19 Changed 6 years ago by
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Frédéric, if you are happy with my changes you can set the status to positive review.
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Updated patch in response to Bernhard's new posting at sagesupport.